Ello poppets and puppets. Chococrepes here with another analysis for ya~
Chapter 9: Hello and Goodbye
What can I say? I loved writing the first part. Seriously some may consider them the 'bad' guys but I think the Organization members are possibly the coolest group ever xD So many of them and so diverse, how can you not add them in your story??
We've covered Axel a little bit in previous analysis but there's more to cover for him I think but we'll save him for a bit later here.
The first new one introduced? Zexion! Zexion I totally saw as the type to be able to analyze things so it was like he would sooo be needed in a company! I changed it up, made him a bit more 'modernized' if you will. Replacing his Lexicon book weapon with a laptop. Can't you just see him typing away on it gathering all sorts of information!? Kinda like how I'm typing this now cept I wouldn't look nearly as cool ;]
Also Zexion is kinda represented as crafty and maybe egotistical? Shown when he remarks everyone else is incompetant except for him. And he's crafty with his hacking skills. Funny...I could really see him as a spy character xD
Demyx is the next one introduced! Demyx, oh how I loved Demyx. In game he was like the 'young' one and by young I mean kiddy. I wanted to incorporate that over like how he showed his enthusiasm in his coffee retrieving idea. Plus he always seemed like such a n00b xD so I think it was good to show him sorta like that when Axel remarks he's no longer a coffee boy but with the higher ups with them. He's just too darn loveable xD
So back to Axel and Larxene. With Larxene she is very...impatient and moody. Kinda like how all girls can get sometimes...except with her it seems like she's having that time of the month, all the time xD Being the only Org. member [not including Xion] I really wondered how she felt about that. So I kinda made up the whole thing of her feeling that men are inferior and are the weaker sex xD
Axel, oh who does not love Axel should be punished! It's interesting to see how Axel switches between calling Roxas, 'Roxas' and 'boss'. Even when he does call him as boss it's kinda almost sarcastic. Kinda hints those two are rather good friends, but Axel respects his position too. He is worried about his friend/boss and therefore gathered everyone up. Although poor Axel's attempt kinda didn't work out too well.
Oh I really enjoyed typing up his personality. Honestly when it came to Roxas's mother I had no idea whether to make an original character or to use someone from the Final Fantasy series. But I couldn't think of an evil blondie in FF games and too lazy to put any real thought in names for an original character. Then as I was typing the first part off and brainstorming I was all let's just call her Mama Roxas -insert lightbulb popping here- I could so see Axel saying that! Thus came up with the name of Axel and possibly the other Org. members referring her as Mama Roxas.
I love the tiny little details between the organization members. Larxene's somewhat sadistic actions towards Demyx, Zexion swatting Axel's hands away over his precious laptop and Lexaeus kinda like a background prop ahha and finally Roxas just totally zoning out. It's like a little dysfunctional family xD
But so we know Roxas has plans to go to Australia! And Axel is tagging along :D
So Luxord makes a slight cameo for now. As Xion's bodyguard! And a nice little twist on things what with Xion moving in with Namine and all. Of course only on one condition!
Leading to...
BAHAHAHA! I decided to pair Selphie up with Pence. Call it a crack pairing, but I think it's a nice balance. Selphie is more of a person who looks on the outside and Pence he's adorable but maybe he can give her a lesson of what's inside that counts. I can be a lil mean ;]
I seriously love the next part. The tiny interactions with Namine and Roxas and it wasn't even the actual date yet! Although there is mentioning of a train and clock tower, they aren't in Twilight Town xD
So Namine and Roxas just relaxing under stars. Aww too cute. I want xD But the stars thing...it's cute and sort of a nudge at Star In My Heart :D
Roxas's next couple of lines Namine twists them in a different meaning then he intended. He wants to be with her but she makes it seem like he doesn't. It reflects the story a bit on how you can take the simplest things and twist their meanings.
In this case it adds a splash of humor and cuteness! So Roxas breaks the REAL news to her. He's going to Australia. Then Namine mentions on how she see's him in France. More so that she could see herself in France. But maybe she is implying she can see herself in France WITH Roxas. That's always a nice way to put it :]
So I've mentioned a handful of foreign locations here and there. Macau, Australia, France...makes you wonder where they all are? I'm leaning towards United States and just with the business thing and the cafe probably New York. I mean this is not set in stone or anything. I find that I like to exclude the main setting of a story just because I like leaving it up to the readers to imagine everything.
Then towards the end, it's so adorable with the whole Atlantica and picking her up xD Ugh...I wish I could be Namine sometimes xD But at least it's nice to know the two had a nice last date before parting.
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