Hello, hello! Had a great vacation :D and now I'm back with a chapter. I think I'm still in vacation mode as this chapter was hard to write T.T That or it's because I'm now in the middle and that's always difficult for me to write -.-
First thing is first. Hope you guys enjoy the mini FST. Don't expect a song analysis soon because that will be happening towards the end of Spring Waltz cuz the songs are reused :P Hence the mini! Now onto analysis of 14!
Olette is getting married!!! Yeah-yuh! Of course I was going to give her a happy ending. Someone has to be happy in this fic right? *get's shot for it not being Namixas right now* Yes, I think I might involve Olette's wedding in. I mean it will be shown, but I want to use it more plot wise...if that makes sense to you guys o.o
Then we move on to Roxas at his office finishing up some last minute work things before going to see Namine. Yay date! Of course our
However not so sure Axel and Roxas are appreciating it. She of course get's angry at Roxas. It's like scary how much she wants to be with him. Tying in with 358/2 days a bit like as she starts to lose it ya know? But it's not like she's full blown out mental yet or anything. (@vanillapuff, I know you're just waiting for this to happen xD)
But she does threaten Roxas to tell Namine everything. Which is not good. On soooo many levels xD I really am too mean to my OTP Dx
Then Ven (HEART VEN! *cough*urm sorry about that) comes in with Aqua and lawl at Roxas and how he notices a more...different Aqua. Pregnant characters are fun to write I think xD
Even more so when the moodswings kick in. Poor Ven xD So Roxas goes off not wanting to be late but has given the ok for Aqua to be involved. Jeez everyone and their mother (hint hint) is going to know at this point. EXCEPT NAMINE! Tsk, tsk.
So Ventus goes on to tell Aqua. It's the basics that we know, except from Ven's point of view. So Namine did in fact went out with Ven, leading to that very first flashback that appeared in the story.
I walked up the stairs accompanied by some other girl who was there to work on a project with someone else in the house.
“So you’re going on a date with him?” I nodded happily.
The door opened revealing a boy with blonde spiky hair and blue eyes. He took one look at us and shouted towards the stairs. “Hey Ventus, your date is here.” Sure enough coming down those stairs was the other half to the pair. Yellow spiky hair and all.
He looked in my direction and smiled. “You look beautiful. I can’t wait for our date!”
So the other girl who was going to work on the project was someone else was Aqua and Roxas. Hence the jealousy xD So Namine did go out with Ventus, but just once. Of course Roxas sure knew how to play his cards right twisting his own little story out of it.
Then Ven continues going on about how the mama Roxas sure liked to mess with them. Resulting in Ven seperating from family and even eloping (@KiomeYasha HA I always planned an eloping but it just made me LOL when you thought it should be Namine & Roxas). Which leaves Namine and Roxas as a target. So there are still some minor details needed to be cleared up by what resulted in the split.
Namine says Roxas cheated on her Ven says Roxas doesn't tell him anything and this author says you'll just have to wait (@Caity-4479, @summerIIfire you guys and your non-patientness! Dx Also @Coolystar89796 You even shunned me for a second because I didn't feel like writing!)
So now we go to picnic!! Roxas and his cooking skills...I envy T.T But Roxas is tired of what's been going on so he takes a nap on Namine's lap cuteee!!
Of course Namine ends up taking a nap. Peaceful scene made me want to take a nap too Dx
But we have to dreams/flashbacks. A somewhat positive and well just entirely negative one. One on another promise by Ventus -actually Roxas- where Namine believes her being there or just her existance in his life entirely is a mistake. Poor thing.
Then we have the aftermath of when they broke up. Namine doesn't believe that Ventus -once again really Roxas- is even serious about this. She says she knows him to well, but gee he sure is convincing from a reader's point of view. Makes you think what he's thinking in his head while this is going on (hint hint).
Oh, that flashback and dialogue was inspired by the song Another Heart Calls by the All American Rejects. It's a good listen :O
So they wake up. And Namine thinks about this. She feels like her life is on repeat (oh what you don't know Namine) and so she's worried about losing Roxas like she did Ventus -aka Roxas-
But Roxas unbeknownst to him uses the same lines he did way back when. Well to an extent. But of course Namine finds comfort in them, just like she did so long ago. History repeating itself indeed.
And then the drama ensues. Holy essssss bomb Mama Roxas is here!? I can't give them a break huh? Well she states how the lower class never learn. She's just acting all so high and mighty I'm ready to push her off her horse...but in later chapters mind you xD
It was nice having little inserts of chatting with my reviewers. In fact it's nice talking to you guys ^^ Hmm...maybe I'll considering posting up a Q&A sometime. Let me know what you think about that via comments! Or you know what send me a question via comments and if I get enough I'll post it up. I'm out!
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